Thanks to Ariduka
for the art!
After my hard drive died, I finally got
a new computer, and redid the work of the previous few posts. I also
changed some vocabulary. I feel like there's too many Re- words in
Actions, so I changed Refill to Enlist. I think I'll need to change
one or two more Action words, but for now it works because it
simplifies the term "Directly Refill" to a single word, and
I corrected instances where I said Refill but meant Recruit. I've
also changed the Discard action (which is the opposite of the Enlist
action) to be "Dismiss", which should separate it from
other instances of Discarding for other purposes. Also, the Discard
Pile is now the Dismissed Pile (which means I sometimes have to say
"Discard into your Dismissed Pile").
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Optomites retains the same attributes
and rules, I just changed the wording in hopes to be clearer. It may
be the type of card that really needs to be explained two ways for
everyone to understand. Originally, for art, I was thinking of some
particularly happy, fluffy-type critter, something jolly with
rainbows and cottontails. But, of course, as is the way of things,
art strikes me funny and I find all kinds of interesting new ways to
look at things. Now this card seems a bit more vicious. It's all
good; it goes with the macabre theme of the game better and Emptiness
could use a few more mad hatters.
If there was ever an Eeyore of
FissureVerse, it would probably be Lugubrious. A bit the opposite of
Optomites, too. I like how both are forest creatures, which is s
common theme of Emptiness, though it's good to have other factions
pick up a few, especially for a spin on a wizened old ent like this.
With Lugubrious, I'm half done with
green cards!
Academic and Research have been a tough
find, especially since they sound like they're the same thing. They
are nearly the only two calm Frenzies left to find, so the rest will
have to be mostly wild and vicious art. This is is some nice,
chill-out style art for Academic that helps set it apart from other
Frenzies, but the alien that's front and center fits with the game
theme. The flavor text tried to push the theme of the card more to
the teaching aspect of an academic person, so I can separate it more
from Research.
Mystics gets a refresh to fall more in
line with the sci-fi aspect of the game; it being too fantasy before.
Also, the new art and flavor text both go better with the
attributes.
I really like how all four have the
same traveler meeting the main creatures of the cards. A few other
cards do similar things, and I think it really helps make them look
cohesive.
